Reviews for Revenge
Paint my spirit green chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
It's really good, so far and I love the name Sea too!
AoideMythos chapter 11 . 8/31/2012
(scream) only one chapter left after this?!
AoideMythos chapter 10 . 8/31/2012
I love how she thinks CORN! that's awesome!
AoideMythos chapter 9 . 8/31/2012
I agree with Sea! James is an evil little man!
AoideMythos chapter 8 . 8/31/2012
Sea stole a bike! that was unexpected! XD
AoideMythos chapter 7 . 8/31/2012
I just LOVE detective stories! Especially when siblings have to work together!
AoideMythos chapter 6 . 8/31/2012
I like the conversations between Sea and her captors. XD
AoideMythos chapter 5 . 8/31/2012
Wow, on the news already? Gahhh! Mean Jim and James!
AoideMythos chapter 4 . 8/31/2012
this time? he kidnapped before?! Errr... Sea, get home safely!
AoideMythos chapter 3 . 8/31/2012
Another Peter, James, and Lydia (not a bad thing, I think those names sound cool!)?! What a memory! He doesn't need to blame Peter though, or even take Sea! Errr...
AoideMythos chapter 2 . 8/31/2012
I would've screamed if that happened to me... next chapter!
AoideMythos chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
That's just like a nightmare I had once (but I gave much more different info)! I woke up after so I didn't get to see what happened next... going to the next chappie!
AoideMythos chapter 12 . 8/30/2012
Woah! I love this story, it's great! What gonna happen to Lydia?! Gotta find out!
TrixieDan123 chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
OH NO! poor,poor,poor Sea!
HSH chapter 12 . 8/10/2012
Aside from the lack of description, somewhat out of place dialogue, and one-dimensional villains who are barely explored, this was a worthwhile read. I'm saying this because I don't know how long you've been writing or how old you are so I'm not going to outright say how bad or good it is. I definitely see that you have talent. I'm sorry to nitpick, I tried to keep it brief though, there was plenty more that I could have said. I hope you weren't offended by anything I said because I only said it to help you get better.
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