Reviews for Mommy
bookppl93 chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Screw you losers! Let her keep the baby! It's not urs!
Beth Brooks chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
this is so painful, and i'm so sorry. Your poetry is expressed beautifully though.
theycallmetalljake chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
You are good enough
Doctor Alex chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
I'm so sorry, Mariah... but maybe it's for the best. Fourteen year-olds aren't supposed to be mothers. I'm sorry, though.
Dark Angel Princess Sarah chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
im sorry
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
The repetition of the beginning at the end really pained me. It was beautiful. I'm so sorry you can't keep the baby. That's not fair that it seems like they're going off of statistics more than who you are or what your plans are for the baby. One day I'm sure you'll get a chance to be a mom through the ways of loving a man and not being raped by your brother. Be strong and look more to the future on this one. You'll get a second chance (or third if you count the abortion?) and you'll be the wonderful mother you're not allowed to be with this one. Be strong always.