Reviews for Fragments
Stonehartdreamer27 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
This is so relatable. Can't even number how many times I've asked the same things. Good job.
I'm your Zero chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
wow deep, good job! everyone feels like this at some time, good job expressing that!
STE chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
This is SwimmingThroughExistance...
This is, in my opinion your best work ever... yet(: great job, beautiful, it flowed just right and the rhyme scheme and rhthm was spot on, i also enjoyed the begeinning and ending lines... the fact that they were same added so much drama to the piece. but it was still very simple and clean. great job!
True Talker chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
I read this and I thought. Do you know that today I wrote a poem about the "mirror"? I find that interesting. I have written 5 poems in the last 3 or 4 days.