Reviews for The Price of Envy
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
This was tremendously beautiful! I like how you give the bird and fate a voice of their own in this piece, very clever. I like your message in this poem, and you presented it with such skill. This was wonderfully done and I enjoyed it very much. Quite a pleasant piece to read, keep up the good work! :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni
IB chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Illusive Butterfly here. Wow. This is actually amazing. I fully love it and I really mean it. :) really well written.
tashaj4de of FF chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Nice one!