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dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
[That your hair being pulled is for making ribbons.] Nice description. I was expecting more sentences like this immediately following. It would have been a cool thing with the rhythm/repetition, plus I just really like the mood the image set and you could have continued it a bit more.

[It's sensual, sexual, and everything one infinite child would never want.] Strange place to bring in the word "child." It made the whole thing even sicker than it already was/

Weird psychology all around, but it makes for an interesting piece.

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