|Reviews for Fodder|
| Anxious Axolotl chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Wow what a totally interesting idea! I was a little confused though, were all the Zacharys' fully grown people (or clones?) or were they actually five/ten/twelve year old children? I also think the leaves deserve a little more explanation of who they are and why they are attacking because they seem really interesting too. Some paragraphing and commas would defiantly make the text easier to read, as well as starting a new line every time a new person.
Pity it was such a short story!