Reviews for Devour
Archia chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
How hungry were you at this stage? Interesting idea in this poem, it was fun to read and I thought that last line was great. It had so much ominousity in it and foreshadowing it made me laugh. Nice poem.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Haha, I can see why you wrote this while you were hungry. XD
It's very unique (in the good way :P).
I perceived this as not a monster, but as a person, maybe overcome by depression or something of the sort, slowly ruining his/her relations with everyone else. I don't know if that was in your intentions or not, but I saw in it an important meaning: the loss of friends and family due to loosing yourself.
I thought it was very interesting. :D
Scadaradna chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I love this! Makes me think what a zombie would have going through their head :P
Cretha Loesing chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
I like it!
It's amazing, horrible stuff written with such a cheerful, innocent voice!