|Reviews for Circus Freaks|
| MagicWords chapter 3 . 7/18/2012
When you write dialogue, start a new paragraph when each new person speaks. Just a little tip. :D
Glad he made the cut! It was a little quick, but not bad :) Keep writing, and don't forget descriptions! Love it!
| MagicWords chapter 2 . 7/17/2012
I liked it! You write very well and descriptively!
I wish there could have been more details: like what Jules did to avoid his bullies? Also, where does this take place?
Jules seems like a sweet character with a lot of potential. I am still excited to see where this goes.
| SummerMoon chapter 2 . 7/17/2012
Wow, this story is awesome. Cant wait till the next part comes out! :)
| MagicWords chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Wish it was longer! I love stories about joining the circus! Update!
| randomdancer64 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Good start but if you want more reviews than this one, youre going to have to update