|Reviews for Tainted Blood Revised|
| FamishedNight chapter 17 . 8/23/2012
Awesome Chapter! Loved It!
| Saria chapter 17 . 8/22/2012
Hmm . . . well, looks like Caleb and Zero are having troubles. At least Stark's doing alright. Loki seems to be having trouble . . . Whoa, Lil, you have the Reaper to deal with!
I bet this is when she gets discovered by hell. Oh, and don't forget to include a few of the human characters and their daily stupidity about unicorns later on.
| Tori chapter 17 . 8/22/2012
Stupid school uniform . . . WHAT KIND OF TEACHER FREAKIN GIVES OUT MORNING DETENTION FOR HAVING YOUR FUCKING SHIRT UNTUCKED? AND I JUST FREAKIN CAME OUTTA THE BATHROOM! OF COURSE MY SHIRT'S GONNA BE UNTUCKED, IDIOT!
All of this story reminds me of a couple of songs . . .
Particularly Bring Me To Life and Broken by Evanescence . . . then . . . ET by Katy Perry . . . I have a tendency to listen to songs when I read.
You should have some sort of theme song for this book. It would be pretty fun.
Are vampires going to be here? I really wanna see a Twilight based character that sparkles and has little fangs.
| booklover1698 chapter 16 . 8/18/2012
HAHA! Yes, I bet it was pretty flattering to have Loki in your dreams, Lils! Update soon! I loved it!
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/18/2012
Lillie's rubbing off on Caleb. Hahaha aha.
| Saria chapter 16 . 8/18/2012
No, little sister. You know, you weren't the only one who didn't wanna get your ass back home. You really want mum and to call the FBI? You're my sister, but you ain't legally in Lori's custody. Lori and I are flipping legal adults. We could get arrested for child kidnapping. I'm only eighteen; I can't go to jail and ruin my beauty before I get married. Then again I could stay a free bachelorette for the rest of my life and go shag random people at a bar or something.
ANYWAYS, yeah, it was a good idea eh? But a necromancer is a nice character and he could be useful so no killing koji-woji.
| Tori chapter 16 . 8/18/2012
Yep. The dude that's in front of Zero is definitely just like Auryn... Or is that my imagination? I don't think that... He's a very friendly person... Hahahaha. Then again, dark god must mean Jayce or someone like that. Yeah, updates have been slow... And school started for both me and Saria... On the freakin tenth of August. Bleh. Stupid charter and Edison rules! I knew I should've fuckin stayed in the Cherry Creek district with my sis's friend instead of moving back home! But nooooo. Goody two shoes little Saria just HAD to pack my bags and drag me back to boring town...
Well, we had to go back one day or another...
I guess that's all for now.
| booklover1698 chapter 15 . 8/13/2012
Great chapter as usual! Update soon! I can't wait for more!
| FamishedNight chapter 15 . 8/13/2012
Awesome Chapter3, Update soon!
| Saria chapter 15 . 8/12/2012
"HEY CONDEMNED! COME OUT AND PLAY! I PROMISE YOU'LL LIKE BEING MAULED TO DEATH!" Caleb's voice echoed from inside the abandoned factory and then an evil, sinister laugh began to echo.
. . . . that's so Caleb. Just thought they would have a better plan like, er, throwing Koji as bait and then going after Zero and then sacrificing Miyabi to the condemned as an apology for getting them back to hell!
That's nice. By the way, I was kidding. :)
| FamishedNight chapter 14 . 8/9/2012
Awesome chapter! Update soon!
| booklover1698 chapter 14 . 8/8/2012
Woah! Grandma is scary! I loved it! Yay, you...sort of saved Zero! Update soon! I can't wait for more!
| Tori chapter 14 . 8/8/2012
Err . . . Adrian is pissing me off . . . he's like a jerk . . . ass. Jerkass.
I like Zero, so don't kill him. Please?
That's rare. Me saying please. I usually never say that. Feel proud.
| booklover1698 chapter 13 . 8/7/2012
Great chapter! Update soon! I am addicted to this story! Why can't Lillie save Zero yet?! Update soon!
| Saria chapter 13 . 8/6/2012
Oh GOD! I thought Lillie had killed Loki for a second... Hahahaha...
Oh yay, they have their abilities unsealed!
LillIie as a vampire? Reminds me of Vampire Knight!
HOW COME I NEVER BLOODY NOTICED THAT?!
Caleb I'm guessing either Kaname or Rido...
Zero errr... Zero!
Damn. I'm good at this guessing stuff...
Ichijou and Stark have completely different personalities, just like Caleb and Kaname... Idk he seems like Rido... Except he's not that awful... He can be really sweet sometimes... I think. Shiki and Loki are pretty much the same except Loki's way-y funner! Shiki's more on the emo side... I think...
The heat must be getting to me...
I need to go lock myself in the fridge now...