Reviews for Tainted Blood Revised
Saria chapter 41 . 5/3/2013
Omg... I'm in love with this song called "Alive" by Krewella... For some reason the girl with the long straight blondish brown hair (think her name is Jahan) reminds me of Lillie O.O haha. She's wearing something Lillie wouldn't wear in million years on the music video though. XD
Naomi Chick chapter 13 . 5/3/2013
I love your revised version. It's all space out and I understand more about the characters.
Tori chapter 41 . 4/28/2013
Did Lillie do something bad? I'm beginning to question her... Motives and such.

... And we're back to the round of hating on Stark. The cycle's back on. Stark screws up, Lillie gets mad, Lillie goes on a rampage and beats him up, and Tori laughs. Yep.
Saria chapter 38 . 4/12/2013
Don't hurt Lexi! I'll kill you!

It seems weird that nobody sees Lillie's dad in her. I mean, if he's her dad, shouldn't they share some resemblance?

... I guess she looks more like her mum. Speaking of which, I wanna meet her!
Tori chapter 37 . 4/6/2013
Oooohhh, so that's what Archaons are... wait, that means Lillie could be killed O.o

Weeelll, she isn't a full hellraine.. so that should count for something, right?
Saria chapter 37 . 4/3/2013
Yey! Lexikinns is here!

... I guess that's a bad thing considering thy fact that he's here to kidnap Lillie. But I couldn't help but miss his sorry ass - I mean butt! He was cute! ;D

Lol. Loki is piiiiisssseeeedddd off! Me likey dangerous Loki... All mad and cool at the same time. Caleb just scares me when he gets mad and Stark's sadism creeps the heck outta me.

We see Bianca... Playing around with her toys. Tobias is up to no good... As usual. -_-

I don't think we should trust Toby. He doesn't seem to have good intentions towards Lillie.

Lllllleeeexxxxiiikkkkiiiinnnnsss snap out of it before I kick your smexay a- BUTT! You need to join Lillie's side so you can tick off Loki so he gets in your freakay mind with his evil Jedi powers and teases your younger self and you start getting adorably blushy and flustered!
Tori chapter 36 . 3/31/2013
I'm debating on whether I should pity Seth for getting treated like trash or hate him for bullying Alexis.
I made up my mind. Lexi is waaayyyy cuter and awesomer than Seth... Plus I like his scythe. A lot. Mostly cuz it makes up for missing Alana XD

He needs to stand up for himself! Don't let that stupid Seth push you around! Whip out that awesome scythe and behead him! I know you can do it, Lexi!... for meeeee... cuz ya know you can't resist my womanly wiles. ;)

Lol. Kay, just wanted to express my undying love for Alexis.
Saria chapter 36 . 3/29/2013
Whoop! Lexikinns is back!

OOOHHHHH, Seth you bastard! Don't scare my Lexikinns like that! I'll maim you!

Seth deserves a good beating... Unlike my Lexikinns... And wrath needs to get kicked in the nuts. Bring out Lillie's feminine wiles and put them to use! SAVE MY ADORABLE LEXIKINNS!
Tori chapter 36 . 3/23/2013
Caleb would escape if Lillie wasn't there... Well, I shoulda seen that coming.

Yep. Valentia is out to geeettttt mmmyyyyy llloookkiiiiii! Noooo!

She can't have him... Nonononononononono.
Tori chapter 35 . 3/17/2013
I veto on that. I liked Alexis.
Yay, Koji has been saved! Now I want Loki and Lillie to REALLY go on a date at the park... and eat icecream.
Me wants more loco Aiden and Ruby... or Mirielle. Pretty sure she's having a fit over losing to Stark.
Saria chapter 35 . 3/16/2013
Aye. Lillie and Loki sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G. And so on. Lol.

I imagined Lillie's father as much younger considering demons don't exactly age. Lol. Whatever though.

Archaon is the new Radon! That name sounds way more villain-y. He he.

Riku is baaacckkk. Saria also wants Lex back. Pretty please? I missed him.

Lol, Lillie... Like, "don't touch my man. I'll kick your nuts." Over Caleb. Gotta love him! 3
Tori chapter 34 . 3/8/2013
Tori is not liking this. Why does Lillie seem coocoo? Isn't Lillie's dad dead? Btw, how the heckie are you supposed to kill a Hellraine? Didn't think it was possible. O.o

Lol. Loki and Lillie got married and had Koji.

That's what Seth gets for trying to mess with Loki...he gets stabbed by Lillie. Yep.
FamishedNight chapter 34 . 3/7/2013
Awesome chapter! Love it!
Tori chapter 33 . 3/3/2013
Riku's back! And as sparkly as ever!

... And younger! Whoopie! Now he's even littler than me!

...okay, sad face at that. I don't wanna be a pedophile... And here I thought I would get something close as to a sparkling guy... Like Edward Cullen.

Loki is pure love. I lurrrvveee him. Literally. Seth needs to get stabbed for trying to kill him. He is pure awesomeness.

Annndd Caleb gets pissed. Stark meets his brat.

...meets his brat. Sounds like Riku's his child or But... I really wouldn't be surprised if he had a kid somewhere... Out there... Being the manslut he is.

I can just imagine it... Ya know, Stark randomly laying on the couch eating apples and then the doorbell rings. He goes up to get it and sees a mini him.

"Hi. I'm your spawn. The woman you banged doesn't want me, so I'm hanging with you, old man."

And then... Stark Anselm faints for the first time in shock.
Excuse me while I go laugh till I cry.
Saria chapter 32 . 2/23/2013
Yep. Mysterious, tall and handsome Jayce in his jacket and sunglasses. Lol. Looking intimidating and dangerous, when at heart he's all soft and mushy.


Yep, so, he's mine. XD. I'mma kidnap him. That okay with you?
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