|Reviews for Tainted Blood Revised|
| FamishedNight chapter 32 . 2/22/2013
Aw... i like the old one as well. Awesome chapter!
| R.Firefly chapter 32 . 2/21/2013
I absolutely adore this story. Full of devious twists and remarkable mysteries. Characters each has their own stories and feelings. The plots thickens and relationship between two characters develop. I also give a A plus for being Well written. I hope the story doesn't end like the one before this. I feel it has more potential. Anyway, the only thing I think you need to improve on is making the chapter longer.
Well, can't wait to read more.
| Saria chapter 31 . 2/21/2013
9 am? NINE FISHING AM? What about meee?! WHY THE HELL DOES MY SCHOOL START AT SEVEN AM!
This is... Injustice.
Anyways, looks like Seth don't know much bout Loki. XD. Is Little Alexis coming soon? Weirdly, I miss him.
| Tori chapter 31 . 2/20/2013
Yep. Stark, Lillie refuses to fall into your charms. Lol.
And yes, Loki will smart mouth you till the day you grow old and tired. It's what you get for helping him.
| FamishedNight chapter 30 . 2/16/2013
| Saria chapter 30 . 2/15/2013
Aww... How sweet of Loki and Stark...
Yah, I think the arc is a tough one. But I still don't get why Seth would hate Lillie; I mean, she didn't do anything to him, right?
| Tori chapter 30 . 2/15/2013
Haha... Loki calling Lillie a weakling... That's so mean. I expected her to get way pissed. I think it's pretty adorable when their guardian instincts take over. They become all overprotective and sweet and stuff. It's one of the only instances I think of Stark as a whole other person.
I still don't get what the fudge Seth's problem is.
| FamishedNight chapter 29 . 2/9/2013
| Tori chapter 28 . 2/3/2013
Noooo Zero! Don't let that bastard control youuuu! I mean, you're the only dude in this story that doesn't have a nasty attitude!
Yes... And Aiden is back to his old self. Lol. Ruby better watch her back.
| Saria chapter 27 . 1/31/2013
Okay, Zero is pissing me off... What does he mean by... Caleb being gone? That's... Impossible.
LOKIIIIIII, go save Lillliiiieee and Callleeebbbb!
Finally, we figure out what Ash is. A demigod... Didn't see that coming. He's the new Percy Jackson!
... Though I doubt the Oympians are in this story.
Stark... So mean. I don't give a flying fudge about how you treat Ruby, though... As long as Aiden still has his roomie. Lol.
Yeeeyyy! Jayce is... Probably about to come in! Then I can hug him and grope him to death! Fan girl squealllll!
Plus it's the only dude that's available. Since Lillie called dibs on the rest and Ruby and Mirielle got hands on Aiden and Ashton... Whatever. I got a smexy god of epicness... In his sexy robe and jeans. Muahahahah, beat that people!
| Tori chapter 26 . 1/31/2013
Aye, aye. They're both gorgeous, Zero, but the question is, who's the one you'd like to screw? Haha. Looks like sleep will have to wait if you're planning to do that... or not in a sense.
Lillie should seriously get a female guardian... have some girl time. Being surrounded by psychopathic dudes who are at each other's throats 24/7 isn't healthy, though it's hilarious for me. lol.
| Saria chapter 26 . 1/30/2013
Yes Caleb. You are the best romancer out there, even above Stark... now THAT's something to be proud of.
It's a wonder that you haven't tried to maul Lillie to death...
Oh, and Jayce's still mine ;)
| FamishedNight chapter 26 . 1/27/2013
Yay! Awesome chapter!
| Saria chapter 23 . 1/25/2013
Hmm... Hopefully, Koji will be saved faster this time. Last time, it felt like too many things were happening at once and Koji was being left for last :).
Plot seems to be moving fairly quickly. That's nice. After this arc is done, hopefully we can have a few, prolly one or two, chapters in between that are just cute and fluffy. I dunno, like a Valentine or Christmas special... Or New Years. Hah... I left out Halloween, the best one, lol.
Speaking of which... I get that Jayce is sorta the only sibling Lillie has... But you referred to Lillie as her father's "remaining child".
Does that mean that there's a possibility of her having more half siblings from her dad's side? I'm pretty sure there's more Hellraines than just lillie and radon left. Like, maybe a few... One or two. It would be pretty reliable having another Hellraine... As an ally... When against radon. Of course she has Jayce, and he's awesome. I likey him. Do you object to me stalking and marrying him? ...hehe...then he'll use his godly powers... And manifest whatever I want... And... Stuff. Hahaha. He's mineeeee...NOBODY ELSE CAN HAVE HIM. MUAHAHAHA.
| Tori chapter 23 . 1/23/2013
Ah... Changes in chapters. Hopefully, the "Save Emo Necro" arc will be shorter than the last one, :). Well... The boys haven't been getting along any better then usual, I see. But... Hopefully, deep down inside, they give a shit for one another.