Reviews for Tainted Blood Revised
Lolitroy chapter 7 . 12/31/2012
Sebastian is my favorite character despite being the bad dude. I wish he could become a good guy haha
Lolitroy chapter 4 . 12/31/2012
This story's so awesome! Better than the original one, more interesting, but both are equally epic :D
Saria chapter 43 . 12/27/2012
Have to love Aiden and Mirielle. Hope for some Kaden, Tobias, Ruby, Ashton and Jayce in action...
Poor Auryn. Biatch Valentia. Why would Stark give a damn about a whore like you? Pain.. Suffer. Will not forgive you for breaking Loki's heart... Well... I'm pretty sure Loki'll take care of you soon, right? (Creepy stare at author)
Tori chapter 43 . 12/27/2012
I don't get the last part. It's making me suspicious about whose side Rain is on.

THAT WAS THE CUTEST LILLIEXLOKIXALEXIS CONVERSATION I'VE EVER HEARD. I swear... Alexis will be groped by me tomorrow. He's just so darn cute.
Saria chapter 42 . 12/22/2012
Evil juice demon... Mr. Bear... Loki really knows how to piss her off. Lol.
Riku... You really would do anything for video games.
Stark, how does it feel to be the one getting used? Shit? Yeah... Join the club.
And Koji still has yet to be saved... Jeez, necromancers are scary possessive.
Tori chapter 42 . 12/22/2012
Hah... Grinch. Lillie, you can come up with something! Like . . . . Hey, Loki, yu look like Jack Sparrow! All he's missing is the eyepatch ... Haha. You two can team up and go on some awesome pirate adventures together!
Poor Stark. Well, I guess this is about time when he gets his secretive asshole mode going on. Like, the time when he starts screwing everything up and breaking Lillie's heart.
And yeah, when is Loki gonna kill Valentia? I just can't wait for that whore to be dead...
CookieEater101 chapter 42 . 12/22/2012
"I hate you."

"Love you too."

Haha, I love that! XD and I found Riku to be so cool. *w*
Saria chapter 41 . 12/15/2012
Haha... Can't help but love Loki when he's teasing Alexis. I wanna see little Alexis... I think he'd be pretty cute. Running away from mice...
Stark needs to get some new material... For Lillie at least. She's immune to his seducing tricks, lol.
And yet again, juice takes over Lillie's mind. Sad. Just sad.
CookieEater101 chapter 41 . 12/15/2012
Go super human! I think I like Riku! :D
Tori chapter 41 . 12/14/2012
Eh... Loki, Loki, Loki... Stop being mean to little Alexis. It's not... Nice.
Wow. I bet roasted mouse is delicious.
Tori chapter 40 . 12/8/2012
First chap, "justlike" needs a space between them.
I'm wondering if Lillie has any more siblings. It would be awesome if she had some sort of cousin or sister... That was a meaner, evil version of her, but you can't help but love her. ;)
CookieEater101 chapter 40 . 12/5/2012
Riku scares me!

Cliffhanger , cliffhanger. -.-"

Poor Koji. :( his past is full of tragedies x'C
Saria chapter 40 . 12/4/2012
Hmm... The chapter was a little gruesome but not as bad as I imagined. Hehe. Again, Jealousy would be a nice factor ... Lol. I love jealousy... OCDC! Idk.
Phillip chapter 2 . 12/4/2012
Good opener. You get me right into the middle of the action. Are you
writing more chapters?
Tori chapter 39 . 11/30/2012
I'm gonna kidnap Riku and keep him in my room... Haha. He's cute. And the only one young enough for me.

Stark and Lillie... The weird part is that every dude in the story cares about her and likes her, but nobody gets jealous of one another. That would be a hilarious scene... I predict Caleb VS Stark, Loki VS Alexis, and . . . Eh, I dunno, Zero VS Koji. Epic.

About Hellraines and Gods . . . Since there aren't many of them, I keep on thinking that they would have to interbreed, meaning marry their siblings or relatives, to keep the line going... That's a weird thought. That reminds me, Gods can't technically die, so Lillie's mom might still be alive? Hopefully? Possibly?
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