Reviews for Creepy Teddy
Eternal Daydreams 989 chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
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What the...
I still liked this...
ayuke chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Very well-written. I love how the automated voice of the electronic teddy is in italics, while the human voices are written normally. It adds an eerily artificial feel the Ole' Fluxpin. However, I couldn't help but to notice that this reminds me of a movie I have watched not too long ago.. Though I can't recall which one!

Nice job. Very eerie. :3 The last paragraph, leading up to Conrad's demise, add a very dark and ominous mood to the short story, while the last two lines effectively wrap it all up.

Keep up the good work, and I'd love to see some more work!