Reviews for Be Careful What You Wish For
Lia Jenson chapter 3 . 7/21/2012
Hmm
I'd hate to call the narrator stupid...But really, she should have known or have tried to set boundaries. Doormats get the worst treatment in horror. She just let's this psycho in plain sight get in her personal space? What the hell?
Plus, as was said, you don't put all that much character development, so all I see is "Victim in horror story" rather than a person I can be invested in.
Sorry, I won't be sticking around for the next chapter.
notBobi chapter 2 . 7/20/2012
Ooh...interesting! Keep writing it! Although it's short-ish, it's good! It would be nice to know more about the character (narrator), though. I like it. :)
TheGirlWithTheNotepad chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
emm...I'm Scottish...lol!