Reviews for Break Me Alpha
adrianafm chapter 4 . 10/3/2014
Great story! Pls more!
BadWolf chapter 4 . 5/2/2014
PLEASE UPDATE! This is much fun to read, and I love the plot line! Keep it up!
hitokori midnight chapter 4 . 4/22/2014
please update !
Nyxofchaos chapter 4 . 4/4/2014
Fantastic story. I am absolutely hooked and have been checking back every couple days for updates, hopefully there will be one soon. Keep Grace fiery though, I love seeing strong female characters. :D
betallen chapter 4 . 2/15/2014
I am really enjoying your story. thank you for sharing it with us. Can't wait until your next update. and yes i also am enjoying the alpha's mate bye a.a.b hopefully you both will update soon.
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 4 . 12/19/2013
Nice story ;)
bookkluver78 chapter 4 . 12/15/2013
i really love your story, it's like a drug and im definitely addicted. plz keep on updating
sami1995 chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
I think you captured the setting really well and I love that it's straight to the point. Great work :D
Sya Rael chapter 4 . 11/22/2013
Lol I love this chapter! Great Job! I am positive that the Alpha Nick right? Well I am pretty sure that he's her mate. Btw I love the fact that she is clueless about the whole werewolf topic. I will surely be waiting to see her reaction.

I also loved that she didn't go hysterical when she woke up and realized that she had been kidnapped. She was smart about the whole situation and decided to play along. Though Nichole seems nice enough so that should have given her the hint that she was ether safe or in a house full with psychotic people. By the way if I woke up in a strangers bed and had someone like Nichole bring me delicious breakfast maybe I wouldn't mind so much being kidnapped. What can I say? I love food!

Ok what is wrong with Matt?! He wanted Logan to kill Wyatt?! Shame on him! Though I was amused by his thoughts in the beginning of the chapter. He really seems like a nice person and I do hope he and Nichole appear often in the rest of the story. And of course Logan can't be left behind. Really he is funny. If I were him I would have tried to kill Grace (of course he can't because she is the Alpha's mate). Still I would despise her if I were him. But it seems like they might also become really good friends.

Now I am very angry at you. Cliffhanger really? It's so not fair! I was waiting for the Alpha to come and talk to Grace and tell her about werewolves. I wanted to see her flip out and run for her life, but of course the chapter ended before any of this could happen. I HATE YOU! Well not really of course. But now I have to wait.

MsTaylor chapter 4 . 11/20/2013
Just found your story an I'm really enjoying it, keep the updates coming
RomanceObsessed chapter 4 . 11/19/2013
She is pretty calm for someone just kidnapped.
augmentedDREAMS chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
This review is for your latest chapter.
Hmm... I liked the chapter. My only concern is her friendliness towards her kidnappers. 'cause last time I checked, you don't act so casual with people who kidnapped you. No matter how good food they make.
claritylong chapter 4 . 11/18/2013
Nyxofchaos chapter 3 . 11/18/2013
Really enjoying it so far. I love her fire and hopefully the leading man isn't as much of a tool as he seems to be. Definitely keep writing! xxx
Nyxofchaos chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Only on the first chapter (prologue actually) and quite captivated so far. Hopefully she has a bit of fire in her and isn't always scared but so far its great!
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