Hey Runner-Isabell Ogg recommended your story so thought I would check it out. I actually really enjoyed it. I had a feeling the woman may have something to do with wolves and maybe the kidnapper BUT I wasn't expecting her to be his mother-great job. For the most part I think you have done very well in writing this-I didn't see any mistakes but if I get into a story I don't pay much attention unless the spelling is horrendous that I can't understand and have to think too hard to read-YOUR'S WASN'T! I will be waiting anxiously for more of this-and CONGRATULATIONS on your first story! You have a great story going here with plot, characters, etc!

Oooo this sounds interesting! Can't wait till you update, and thank you for all your kind reviews xxx

It's really interesting, I hope you continue :3

I like it. Keep going, please. ;)

This story has a really good start! It was kinda cheesy which I secretly like (shh!) and it had a lot of suspense. U should post a new chapter soon and I think u should have flashbacks from when she got kidnapped and when she was kidnapped! Just a suggestion though! And I would love if it was longer this time. Still good start though!
-Lexi :D

First and foremost...longer chapters...and Continue the thats 're to a great start,just dont stop writing continue it!

It's really interesting so far can't wait for you to update D