Reviews for What We Want |
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![]() ![]() Amazing beginning Katie! It really drew me in, I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() Oh, a new story - how exciting! I love this, it seems like a great start and I'm intrigued. Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg Katie! I cannot tell how happy it makes me to read a new original from you! I literally squealed out loud when I saw this is my inbox! I loved this chapter so much and I can't wait to read more! Danielle (funnyhoney06 from LJ) |
![]() ![]() good start. I hope you continue the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm obsessed! This is so different from everything you've written. And the fact that Marcus is inspired in Michael Fassbender, makes me want to read it even more. I love him, he's so hot. Can't wait to read more. :D |
![]() ![]() ooh nice first chapter. do we have visuals for these characters? i always like visuals. I'm sensing MArcus an Amy aren't in love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay for posting up a new story! Can't wait to see how everything plays out! |
![]() ![]() It's great to see a new story from you considering how fantastic all your other works are! I throughly enjoyed this chapter and I rather like Harper so far. I'm very interested to see how her relationship with Marcus will go from here. Definitely anticipating the next update to this story, and any of your other ones! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG. WOW ! I'm speechless. This is a really GOOD first chapter. I'm addicted already. Is he really engaged or is it just a publicity stunt? How come he didn't answer her questions or try to explain anything? Dang I have so many questions. Please update soon. -Danielle :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dun dun dun! Drama! I like it so far and can't wait until the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello. As first chapters go, that was pretty good :), I thought it was interesting and am looking forward to the next chapter. I just want to point out a typo that I noticed there's a point where you type "everyone know" I guess this should be knows. Take care. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting! I'd love to read more! I've never really given original fiction a chance, but I must say I really love it. P.S. Its wierd that you are 'Kate' and not 'Katie' lol. It sounds like two different people. I saw one person reviewing and she mentioned adultfanfiction and a blogspot? But I'm guessing you moved everything to LJ? Just checking LOL, I love your stuff, and if they are still up somewhere I would fully grasp the opportunity to read it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story already has me hooked! :) Can't wait to read more of what happens. It's a refreshing beginning and I love your writing style. I don't mean to be rude - but there were a couple of typos and minor grammatical errors :) |
![]() ![]() omg This is going to be so good and I'm so keen to read more! Ahh...your stories always makes me happy. :D Don't make us wait too long for the next installment though! :D |
![]() ![]() Sounds really good, I can't wait for the next chapter :) |