Reviews for Nature's Deception
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Beautiful! I love the rhyming of this poem, and it flows together so well it's amazing! Lovely, keep it up :D
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
wow this is really good, you connected nature and lack of nurture so well! it always fit! it never fell out, never once was i think well i guess that worked... it all just flowed. awesome job! keep it up!
theshadow603 chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
This poem is very good, very good indeed. Constructed well, no significant errors. Creatively written. Keep it up :)