Aw, please continue

So far, so good

This is really good! Please don't stop!

Interesting set up. I look forward to seeing where you take this if you ever come back to it.

please continue! you've got me hooked!

Is this ever gonna be updated

Please write more, great so far!

Why haven't you finished this story? I love its beginning, it has such potential.

Love it. Can't wait to read more

lol i love this already! her family is whoa, dats all i can think of, anyway update plz!

I love this story so far! :) I just hope that through her parents attitudes, he can start to undestand her more and than just have some conversations just to get to know the basicoe another :) Update soon!

I like this story it's adorable. But you need to read everything before you post it, there were so many grammar and spelling errors that it distracted from the story. As far as the story in the previous chapter you said they were supposed to have a mating ritual which is by the way you explained it they have sex with their mate in front of the whole pack. You could get rid of that or do something else. Another thing how do they suddenly know each others' names at the beginning of chapter two? At least have them give their names. When did Sanura shifted back to her human form? It doesn't make sense that she would have done so when she had refused to in front of Ari. So that's why I assumed she was still in her ocelot form but you made it seem like she was a human. Just some suggestions.

This is cute, I hope she gives him a chance soon. Although feeding her is pushing it too far. I like the twist about her being rich and famous, is he rich aswell? I hope so. UD soon pls! U both r doing a great job

I love it! Pls UD soon!

I think it's a really good beginning and I really want to see where this story goes. Just a couple things, though, the grammar and spelling is...terrible. Sorry to say, have you ever thought about getting a beta? This story is really good but you have no idea how many people just stop reading once they see so many mistakes. What I'm saying is: You have a chance to make this story even better. If you want, I could beta for you.