This is downright beautiful, I love the emotional impact on it, it’s a very beautiful and inspiring poem. I love the line at the end especially, it really vies that, “Living in dreamworld” idea that I think this poem is supposed to portray. This is really pretty with wonderful descriptions, it has beautiful imagery, I could practically see the scene in my head. Absolutley wonderful, good job!

That was an amazing poem! I really loved it!

beautiful poem i love the last two lines "Because we wouldn't have reality, without dreams." :) good job!

Beautiful. This poem leaves you thinking, and the last three lines are really marvelous and true. Amazing job, keep it up :D