Reviews for Shadows On The Wall
Little girl Big world chapter 10 . 12/14/2012
i'm sorry. this poem is hauntingly beautiful and very sad.
Little girl Big world chapter 8 . 12/14/2012
i've been there before. i really relate to a lot of these poems and i wish there was something i could say that could help but i'm not so good at knowing what to say..all i've got is that you're not alone.
Little girl Big world chapter 7 . 12/14/2012
i understand this feeling so well.
Little girl Big world chapter 6 . 12/14/2012
I really like this, " Life goes on. And perhaps it does, but such knowledge does not inspire the spirit."
Little girl Big world chapter 4 . 12/14/2012
"One day I'll escape this all, I thought to myself. One way or another." gripping words.
Little girl Big world chapter 3 . 12/14/2012
you are completely deserving. i can understand this feeling of not being good enough though because i have spent the last couple years feeling the same way in my relationship. & i love the last line, its really sweet.
Little girl Big world chapter 2 . 12/14/2012
i can relate so much. i love the second stanza, interesting way of looking at it.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/29/2012
Disturbing...I like this a lot. Especially the line "caressing your wounds."
aria's melody chapter 8 . 10/9/2012
Just read all eight of these chapters in one sitting and am now speechless. Beautiful job, my friend.
atomic-pocket-watch chapter 5 . 8/25/2012
It sounds like the end but your words are so darkly lovely that I hope it's not.
Delicate chapter 4 . 8/23/2012
I've stayed away too long
your words are still as haunting as they ever were