Reviews for The Keeper
JillandGinny chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
This is really good! Keep up the good work! (:
Anxious Axolotl chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
I'm interested to see what happens next! You don't have to start a new line for every single sentence, it feels awkward to read, like you're not sure if you're writing a poem or a story. Also, if you think the dialogue is confusing, just add 'The Keeper said' or something to the line instead of having an A/N at the end. That way, no-one will be confused and then not be able to focus on the rest of the story because of one teeny line of dialogue. I really liked the nature powers!