Reviews for Bravery
LuckycoolHawk9 chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
I like the way it starts with the power of one word because so many people how powerful a simple word like no is. I dislike the length of this piece, it was too short for even a short story because it left too many questions such as what are her sins? How is she brave? It feel more like a snippet than a story and that bugged me. still write more!
Archia chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
I really liked what this was saying, how such a young person can make such a difference. And what I actually liked, what that it seemed to come across that her answer wasn't because she was ignorant, but because it was the right answer. I enjoyed how much about a lot of things was said in such a short piece. Great work.