Reviews for All About Us
MagnificentFern chapter 33 . 10/20/2015
Thanks for the new chapter (part 1)! Now Chris is trying to steal Jon away or something? That won't do D:
Myght Dyno chapter 32 . 12/8/2014
I would have liked to see Jon and Roman get busted but they had the right idea to stop before getting ahead of themselves. I am going on a gut feeling that the drama club will be shocked to find out they are together.
Myght Dyno chapter 31 . 12/5/2014
I read currently all 31 chapters, Kiksebof, and I must say this had caught my attention the second I started reading without realizing it until the tenth chapter. Despite how the story not being as structured as a novel -not that I'm complaining- this is a really great homosexual story between males. If it gets noticed on a somewhat national level, I think you would be getting a trophy for it, that is my opinion on how well thought out it is.
Dao chapter 31 . 10/18/2014
Love Your story :)
I can't wait to See (read xD) how their relationship will develop!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
This story is perfect for teens 16 and under. There are just to many grammar mistakes and weird sentencing that makes this too much of a bother to try and read. Plus this story's plot is extremely overused by writers. My question is when people will start to realize that and think of different story idea to write.
Bloody Dawn chapter 30 . 7/2/2014
Is jon gonna cheat on roman ? And what's with tylor anyway ? he's so jumpy !
ToxicHeartbreak chapter 28 . 1/9/2014
OMG this chapter was the best yet! I don't know if that's weird for me to say but it's true... You're a phenomenal writer! I can't wait for the next chapter!
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
I prefer to write my reviews while I read.

So far, my only issue is your lack of punctuation. There was a sentence and you started a new one without a period. (Or a comma would have sufficed, in the very least to show an attempt.)

"My name is Jonathan Joseph Black I am a football player..."

There should have been a period after the name.

There are quite a few other errors regarding your lack of punctuation. Another review beat me to it, hopefully you can find the errors yourself and it helps you grow.

AndAwaySheFlies chapter 27 . 12/10/2013
oh my gosh that was adorable! im so done right now i just cant! im so glad she reacted that way... i probably would to if i ever had a son who did that... lol id be soooo happy! thanks so much for updating! it was adorable!

oh, by the way... its maria! i finally made an account... lol youre welcome. loves ya, potato c:
Bloody Dawn chapter 26 . 11/5/2013
I for one love your story the way it is and i really can't wait to read next chapter
Fiona Church chapter 26 . 11/4/2013
Reeally love this story, keep up the good work. I think your style, grammar and vocab is improving quite steadily :)
Maria chapter 26 . 10/31/2013
c: I'm so happy to updated! I like this chapter a lot lol thank you so much YOU NEED TO UPDATE IT MORE OFTEN BABY I LOVES YA C:
Love ya potato c:
Russle chapter 25 . 9/26/2013
I like the story so far, and the character development that came with it and the fact that the romance didn't all happen at once and you slowly eased yourself into it. :) Might I say though, periods/commas might be good when you're doing dialogue.
Maria again chapter 24 . 9/14/2013
Yay! I can't tell you how happy this makes me! Great writing, and I can't tell you how much I squeaked when he told roman to be his bf lol :D
Update soon! :D :*
That one lurker chapter 24 . 9/4/2013
Your suspicion is most accurate ;)
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