Reviews for Clouds
C.J. Black chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Haha, :) that's a nice poem. but I cant help think of basic science... I would be a cat, -nothing to do but eat and sleep. sounds like the high life to me...!
walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
This poem was easy to understand, I like it. Just one mistake you made was 'there' instead of 'their'. But keep it up.
my.life.is.over chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Beautiful. :)
Mayu Sun chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Nice, I can relate to the feeling.
Rogue Energizer Bunny chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Interesting. I really like how you keep the topic of the clouds the whole time, instead of using it as a hook/jumping-off point and then abandoning it. Nice job.

AND I'M WORKING ON IT. D: