Reviews for Haikus
Abbytjie chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
The first line of the first haiku doesn't fit in with the rest of it.
I think in haiku V you meant stars instead of starts, remember to always triple check your work.
My favourite one was definitely VI, I love the connection you make to love making the world go round and people getting dizzy when they're in love.
All these haiku are really beautiful; they flow beautifully and are lovely to read.
LsyBlurb chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Wow! These were all amazing (: I love your choice of wording! Beautifully written