Reviews for Mass Effect
dfwthought123 chapter 1 . 1/9
Your writing here gives a hurried and chaotic effect that I think eloquently reflects the event of the shooting. Your language is powerful and moving and the simplicity of the piece is stunning. I actually really loved the break from the metre at the end. It is jarring and perhaps a little uncomfortable but, when talking about a shooting, how can we be anything but? I loved the piece. Great work!
Punslinger chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
This is a fine poem that captures the anguish and
horror we all feel about the wanton mass murder. But I
don't think it should be classified as "war."
"Entertainment" might be more accurate since the
shooter seems to have confused movie violence with
real life.
romaniac chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Cool poem! Very discriptive
Anxious Axolotl chapter 1 . 7/20/2012

Sorry, couldn't resist. Great poem though, very evocative.