Reviews for Hope
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I liked and disliked the rhyming for a couple reasons lol. I liked its sing song rhythm in the last two lines, the 'my oh my' really adding to that. I felt the rhyming in the first lone however was inconsistent with the rest of the piece and would have worked better if the line was separated by a full stop as that would make the change in tone and flow seem more purposeful. Loved the image of the butterfly though because it nicely expresses the idea of hope. Lovely :)

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