Reviews for Eve
vanillachyrae chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Wow. Just wow. The story of Adam and Eve made more interesting. I love it how you explained Eve's side :D. I agree, man was made to be curious and we all make mistakes. By the way, I also love Eve's attitude in the story. However, no offense, I hate how Adam responded with "Are you done?", I mean after all that drama? xD But the story was great in general, as well as the writing. Hoping for sequels :3
thehighestsin chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
this was a creative take on an age-old story- I enjoyed it! any plans for a follow-up? I particularly enjoyed the flow to your writing; I tend to be overly descriptive when writing stories, and I thought the short sentences and inner-dialogue really worked well in this piece. great job. :)