Reviews for Teenagers
Valkyrie Ashleigh chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
This one is really good. c:
YasuRan chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
I like that you didn't over-dramatize the angst which comes with those teenage years, though you did touch upon it towards the end ('Yes, our minds are different/ And we bottle feelings up/ But you don't have to tell us'). In a way, it makes teenagers sound more human and relatable.

A correction: 'If you're anti-teen you grew to fast' - 'too fast'

I also like that your rhyming scheme was constant. It established a nice sort of rhythm early on.
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Very nice. Lovely job with this poem, keep it up :D