|Reviews for Teenagers|
| Valkyrie Ashleigh chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
This one is really good. c:
| YasuRan chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
I like that you didn't over-dramatize the angst which comes with those teenage years, though you did touch upon it towards the end ('Yes, our minds are different/ And we bottle feelings up/ But you don't have to tell us'). In a way, it makes teenagers sound more human and relatable.
A correction: 'If you're anti-teen you grew to fast' - 'too fast'
I also like that your rhyming scheme was constant. It established a nice sort of rhythm early on.
| Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Very nice. Lovely job with this poem, keep it up :D