Reviews for Drowning
MagicWords chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Oh sad, she drowned? I was confused because they were punching each other laughing, but then she is mad at her sister for spying? Oh well, it was still scary. The thoughts and images were clear.

Some grammar/spelling errors. But nothing major. Nice piece.

MW
LsyBlurb chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
This really got me.. It was so beautifully described and it brought back memories for me.. That's how powerful it was. Great job!