|Reviews for The Good Life Lasts|
| ConcreteAngelRoxHerHalo chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Creepy, but excellent.
| steph135 chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Ahhh i see you found inspiration through a dead mouse...thats pretty awesome! Okay, first with the little stuff. I loved the dicriptions you give for the little guy, it set the stage for the rest of the poem and gave a great visual. The pace of the poem was good to. It was fast and steady, which is great for reading. Its the perfect rythem. okays, so now to the bigger stuff; the purpose of the poem. I think the point is that, in the end, we all die. no matter how good or bad the life, it will end. There is a comparison, it seems, between you and the dead mouse. Though you both lead very different lives, in the end he will die (okay, he's already dead) and you will die. That's what you, and every other living thing have in common. I dont know, that's what i got from it. im pretty good at diciphering poems, but i feel like im missing something here...who knows, i could be way off the mark! anyways, great job!