Reviews for The Jump
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
You know it was dark but also I could take it as though you are about to go on stage or bungee jump or have an elicit relationship! I liked it! Good write!
John-the-H-is-silent chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Dang, third poem i've read in a row on murder or suicide :( It's good though. The only line i'm a bit confused about is line 7. Do suicide victims want their friends and family to watch them die?
Le Marauder masque chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Thank you so much guys! I still can't believe someone likes this, much less two!

Thank you Shadow x Wolf, I honestly love writing dark stuff and twist it into something deceptively happy.

And Purplemonkey123, I apologize for my horrendous spelling mistake and hope that by fixing it immediately you might forgive me :)
Purplemonkey123 chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Beautifully written i liked it a lot. You spelled opportunity wrong but still a very good poem.
Red Red Ribbons chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
That really was great. I loved it, how it was both grotesque and beautiful a the same time. Sorry this is so short, but it's on my iPod :)