|Reviews for Phoenicia: Harmony|
| Simbeswore chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Hmm... I noticed this prologue was good.
I guess you sort of purposely gave a hint away of whats going to happen.
"Something is wrong in the land of Phoenicia. A new danger arises, one more powerful than the threat of the world war, gods, or even the Phoenix itself."
Something greater than the world war, eh? I am getting insanely curious!
| Simbeswore chapter 3 . 7/25/2012
Very nicely written! I love how you are briefing us about the cultures and lives of different countries through the characters.
Can't wait to read more!
Enjoy your day! Happy writing! :)
P.S. I would personally like to read more of your sister's character. She's my competitor afterall.(LOL) ;P ;) :D
| Simbeswore chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
Amazing as always. I really liked the writing style in this chapter like every other chapter of yours :p. The scenes were beautifully described I'm curious to know about this 'Zero' character. He must be a super evil villain of some sort.
Good to know you have started writing seperate stories. It was lind of hard for me to find the chapters I hadn't read.
| MeAreWinner chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Cant wait for you to start with this one...tisis my last review for now btw...ill read more 2morro lol...