Reviews for Each Moment
JaneMonroe chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
I like how simple and short this is, but how at the same time it says it all. It's one of those things I'll be able to look at over and over and see something new with each read.
fantasybookworm2012 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Yet I spent 4 hours yesterday designing what is want to my house to look like. My mom said I needed to have a giant air filter...I guess I'm nkt living down having a flock of pet birds anytime soon.
And maybe that's true but sometimes it's easy to forget that. Good poem.
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Very very very great write. There was so much emotion and truth in this. My breath caught!
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
I don't really get the last line. At first I thought that the italics weren't part of the sentence, but that doesn't make it make more sense. How does it connect?

Great poem, though. It's simple, but it says a lot. I love the emphasis that comes with the short lines, and the italics give some variation because, in my mind, I read them like a whisper.
Purplemonkey123 chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
and again another short, sweet, simple poem, but still it says so much good job!