Reviews for A Bridge's Song
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I didn't like the lone gap after the first line, I felt it broke the rhythm of the poem. I didn't understand the troll reference either. I did like the image of a song lying on top of a bridge rather than within it which is what I would expect to hear so that was unique. Good job :)

Ceri from the Review Game’s Review Marathon (link in profile)