Reviews for Fear |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, this was kinda creepy... *shudders* Very good though. Loved the twist in the end. P.S. This is XxYesterdayTodayTomorrowxX from fanfiction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh that's creepy! You did well! Shocker ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You do a great job of drawing your reader in with few words. Then to reveal the twist at the end leads me to wonder what the father had to do with the friend. Questions! It feels like this should be more than a oneshot. Good job! MW |