Reviews for i break my heart around this
co-creating metamorphosis chapter 1 . 6/10/2014
grief. :(
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
"the warm rush of winter in my hips-
these greedy fingertips clutch at
spine-snapping pearls"

This perfection.

Brilliant, hard-hitting poem.
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Ouch. I couldn't help saying that. this was painful and the ending was like being splashed by freezing water. Great write.
electrical moon chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Beautiful poem! I particularly love 'warm rush of winter in my hips' and 'spine-snapping pearls'. You've got really gorgeous imagery and I love the formatting.
whisper queen chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
I'm sorry.
Kamon24121 chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Ugh, I hate that.. :c Great poem though! :)