Thats so sad! At least is seems like the start of a beautiful friendship haha:) well written and easy to read, i can never be bothered to read something very complicated! Im guessing he was homeless btw, thats why he stole the phone and needed sleep? Anyway, loved this so much!

Wow. At first I wasn't going to read this, but then I saw the one review and it changed my mind. This is a great story. I liked that he stole the phone and only returned it once the girlfriend texted him. That was a nice twist. And his solution was pretty cool too, kind of like how I would want my friends to respond. You did a great job!

this is really good, you've got a talent for writing:)xox