Reviews for Cascade
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
I really like this one and I would give it a 4.5 out of 5. I liked the imagery in "wobbling stars" that was fun and created a feeling of a shakey reality but becomes solid when she sings. I love the imagery with the "words like angel falls into/misty nothingness." however, I feel like the 'angel falls' could be written differently perhaps angels fall? And the ending was clever. i was thinking "fills like thunder" should be feel but then I got to thinking about how fill could be used. Thunder fills the sky to keep it from being quiet much like her voice does especially if it's a powerful one so I actually like that as fills. This was easy to read and I quite enjoyed it. There were grammatical errors, like not capitalizing after the periods but I liked that. it was quirky and made this more cute to read. Great write and I hope this is like a critique that you wanted for this one. Keep up the great work!