Reviews for A State of Shock |
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![]() ![]() ![]() LOL that was so embarrassing, if I ever fell in front of someone I like I'd be eternally embarrassed |
![]() ![]() ![]() This isn't going to be a great story... if you're not updating. im calling all gods, goddesses to open your consciousness and make you remember to finish this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love what you wrote in this chapter. Every scene were worded perfectly that the emotions and actions transform to life. I can just imagine everything. Really love what you made of this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was one hot embarrassing number. Why isn't the key located below there, you know... in her pocket? :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh. The story is great. But you know what ain't great? Now updating! D: Imma go cry in a corner now. :'( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter. Loved it. I can't wait for the next update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! Can't wait until the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() oh my god that was awesome! hurry update soon! :) now would be nice. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start. Next chapter please ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it hurry and post again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice start. I hope more is coming soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Great Job on this! I love it (: the way you described everything was amazing, I had a clear image of what was happening and that takes talent on behalf of the writer so great job! Also I love the dialogue you wrote for this, it sounded SO realistic. Like it'd be something the characters would actually say, also, for the one chapter you gave us a pretty clear image of the characters and their personalities. Amazing job, do continue (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I usually don't read F/F stories, but this one is pretty good. I like the plot so far, and I hope you continue with it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not something I usually read, but I do watch a lot of shows like Glee, Pretty Little Liars, etc. that have lesbian girlfriends and everything, so I didn't mind one bit. Anyway, it's a great story. Very entertaining! Can't wait for more chapters! :} |