Reviews for A State of Shock
Nejie 8059 chapter 3 . 12/30/2014
This isn't going to be a great story... if you're not updating.

im calling all gods, goddesses to open your consciousness and make you remember to finish this story.
Nejie 8059 chapter 2 . 12/30/2014
I love what you wrote in this chapter. Every scene were worded perfectly that the emotions and actions transform to life. I can just imagine everything.

Really love what you made of this chapter.
Nejie 8059 chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
That was one hot embarrassing number. Why isn't the key located below there, you know...

in her pocket?

:D
breakthehabit chapter 3 . 4/13/2013
Ugh. The story is great. But you know what ain't great? Now updating! D: Imma go cry in a corner now. :'(
CelticX chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
Another great chapter. Loved it. I can't wait for the next update :)
Nia Love chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
This is really good! Can't wait until the next chapter!
earthserpent chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
oh my god that was awesome! hurry update soon! :) now would be nice. :)
CelticX chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
Great start. Next chapter please ;)
H. Earthserpent chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
i like it hurry and post again.
KM Rune chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Nice start. I hope more is coming soon.
LsyBlurb chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Wow! Great Job on this! I love it (: the way you described everything was amazing, I had a clear image of what was happening and that takes talent on behalf of the writer so great job! Also I love the dialogue you wrote for this, it sounded SO realistic. Like it'd be something the characters would actually say, also, for the one chapter you gave us a pretty clear image of the characters and their personalities.
Amazing job, do continue (:
LetsJustRideAway chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I usually don't read F/F stories, but this one is pretty good. I like the plot so far, and I hope you continue with it
Kamon24121 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Not something I usually read, but I do watch a lot of shows like Glee, Pretty Little Liars, etc. that have lesbian girlfriends and everything, so I didn't mind one bit. Anyway, it's a great story. Very entertaining! Can't wait for more chapters! :}