Reviews for Game of Fear
Kate chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Wow. The sort of choppy style really sets the tone for this. An awful topic, but beautifully written. When you say this is a mini-biography, I gather you've been through this, and I'm so, so sorry for that. I find writing can have a therapeutic effect when dealing with trauma and hardship. Stay strong, and wonderful job 3
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
very descriptive, and graphic but its good that you have decided to express this because maybe it will give others strength to speak to someone.
good job
Al chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
It forces you to feel emotional reading this, great work of art.
Jesus and his Lawyers chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
A tasteful way of approaching a serious topic, good job.
The little short sentence snippets at the end ("Scared. I am unclean. My fault. Can't tell. Secret.") and the last sentence seem a bit awkward. I think "this game of fear" could be cut off without taking anything away from the last paragraph, as well as that bit I quoted above.
One last thing: flames. Very different from criticism. They shouldn't be encouraged.
Have a good one.
Regards, Claire
Annie Dot chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
You had a very nice choice of words. I was close to crying at the end of this.