Reviews for Point Blank
ToeshoeMezzo chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
This is incredibly beautiful.
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
It's such an eerie poem but I just want to know what happens tonight! I really want to find out the story behind this but I am happy guessing. I think if a poem can make you want to find out more about it and the story it's telling then the writer should be incredibly proud. I loved it and it's great as always :-)
Valenteen chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Woah, and wow. This is really good. I like it, and your word choice used. I love the last seven lines.
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Wow, lots of intrigue with that last line... very beautiful imagery and descriptions of both people. Lovely metaphors too :D
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
This piece is stuffed with so much emotion, I loved it.
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Forgiveness, betrayal, love and hurt...its all there and more! You packed in so much emotion into this piece, its mind boggling. Another wonderfully written masterpiece. Well done, well done! :)

As always, keep writing!

Ivy Climbroe chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
I really like this! It has its own descriptive qualities that really make you think. Beautiful. :)

Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Wow. This is written and described so extreamly well, it leaves me speechless. Outstanding job, keep it up :D