Reviews for Welcome to Underground Part One: Quest to The Core
Not Bent Just Broken chapter 13 . 8/7/2012
Nice ending!(:
Not Bent Just Broken chapter 8 . 8/7/2012
It was intense. Well done. I think you are pacing this story really fast. Maybe too fast?
Not Bent Just Broken chapter 6 . 8/6/2012
I do agree when you said this was a fast paced story - it's very fast. I like it all the same.
Not Bent Just Broken chapter 5 . 8/6/2012
I'll come back in a while to read more(:
Not Bent Just Broken chapter 4 . 8/6/2012
I don't think you have to do a disclaimer at the end of every chapter...but whatever makes you happy(: Anyways, I really like where this is going!
Not Bent Just Broken chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
I am surprised that I am the only one to review this. I like it(:
Umm, one thing...where is the mom that took them all to the museum?
Not Bent Just Broken chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
Wow. I really like it(: I think I'm going to read more! Also, I will follow this story(: Keep it up!