Reviews for What i fear
wordsaresodifficult chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Nice poem. I like it!
-Robin
fantasybookworm2012 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
... Agreed. 100%
I'm my own person and when we walked around the school in 7/8 grade I'd stop and talk to any little bug we'd see. The rest of the class would try to kill the colony. And I collect stuffed aninals(took me 3 HOURS to organize them then I ha to move them around to have my flooring replaced.) and have taken one to school before.
My sister thinks I need to "grow up." But I just tell her no and try to get her in on my imagination.
Very relatable poem for me and I liked the rhyme scheme.
Purplemonkey123 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
I sadly understand this poem very well D: I know what it's like to feel like an outsider. Good job on the poem
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
This had a great flow and there was nothing in this that stopped it. I also didn't get bored while reading this like i do with a lot of poems unfortunatly (especially my own *sigh*) but great write. You rhymed with words that don't necessarily rhyme and that takes skill.
Palomita love1 chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
This poem is really touching. It expresses a lot of emotion and I really liked it. :D