I definitely want an another chapter from here! Pretty please! This was just so good and damn hilarious! XD

OK that was one of the funniest dates I've read about.

I have never grinned and loved a story so much!

Aw, that was too cute! I seriously love how you've written about the siblings without having to include them explicitly. This was very very sweet. Now, I'm just missing a story on the middle brother... (Please take the hint...)
Just kidding, though. Your writing is just so brilliant that I could do with more of it in my life. Bestest of wishes!

Awwww :D

Just wondering, does olivia have a friend name Emma mercer? i've just reread the bleachers and realize that olivia teachs biology and emma went to study biology at ucsd.
Is it a coincedence?
It will be wonderful if the bleacher couple show up in Ryan-olivia wedding :))

I kind of miss your andrew violet story. And I read the last chapter. anticipating ryan wedding, I read this story again. love it!

Haha ! This was awesome ! No matter how much of a disaster the date turned out to be it still sounded like lots of fun !

And they're getting married? Awwwwwwwwwwwwww

Aw, that is the cutest thing I've EVER read! So sweet :D :D :D I loved it :) Looking forward to reading more of your stories :D :) :) :)

aww...

First, you are absolutely amazing. This was the first story of yours that I read, and you made a creative piece of writing out of the common first date idea. I enjoyed it so much and was drawn in so easily that I had to read more of your stories.

Second, I love that your characters are so believable. And you write them in such a way that I immediately like them and support whatever is happening with them. I'm a sucker for romantic fluff, so it makes me really happy to read your works!

There was a third, but I've forgotten it. It was probably something along the lines of "I like your style of writing" and "I look forward to reading more from you" and the like. But really, thanks for this!

Cute!

That was SO adorable!

That was adorable! So many horrible things going wrong, but hey, if a guy like Ryan was along for the ride, I certainly wouldn't mind, just like Olivia!