Reviews for I Am Them
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Darkest poem ever I think you similes in this are GENOIUS and help it become so dark. Its aout a fight within oneself about compels me into it; it also has beautiful dark side to it.
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
This has quite a dark tone and suggests to me that the speaker could possibly be hallucinating. I like the imagery, you always have that detail in it, but I'd have liked some more imagery on who 'they' are an what they're doing to her. But that's just me being picky! I love the piece despite this, and I think you're a great writer - you just need to believe it! :)
Angels Cry Tears Of Blood chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Wow, this is great. I really like the last three lines.