Reviews for The Monsters
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I love the word at the end 'askew' reading this reminds me of that bed scene during the openning ceremony at the Olympics with the kids. The monsters under the bed is a phase most kids go through and you really captured that phase really well in this poem.
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Brilliant, I love the concept, its genius! Your writings really good. You are very skilled, your imagery alone is hauntingly brilliant. Great job, keep writing!
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Well I wish I could have nice monsters hiding under my bed but unfortunately I have goblins under there which as you know are mischievous little devils! I love this poem and it just appeals to my imagination! Fantastic - is how I can best describe this poem in one word! :)
fire-elemental chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Oh how dark, I positively love it.
Angels Cry Tears Of Blood chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I like this, it's a nice comparison and I feel the same way a lot of the time.