Dundunduuuunnnn!
...seriously that's where you had to end that? Now I have to read on. Kinda excited this start is better than I expected.

This story is already great. The romance is a little creepy, but I am intrigued.

I literally squealed when I saw that this got updated. Lol anyways, the way the ceremony is payed out is really neat. I can't wait to "see" it in action and the thoughts happening with it. And then Aza says sorry there at the end? My gosh, I just love that couple!

and the plot thickens.

good chapter.

Telepathic aliens with identity disorders and hermaphrodites! i'm hooked. waiting on an update.

intrigued. and plan to follow this story to the end.

great chapter please please update am so excited to read how Vita is giong to react and how he might punish her for it ;)
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Ohh Myyy GAWD, I can not believe that Vita is bi-polar but now that I think about it, it kind of fits. I mean he always had insane mood swings... Hmm it was brilliant, I read it last night at my friends sleep over party and I literally shouted OMG and they all looked at me funny and they got a pissed because they where all trying to sleep, ooh welll...
Ooh and I liver that you got a sort of look in to Vita's unusual character and I couldn't belive what I was reading when he was thinking about her in sort of endearing terms ( not sure if that is how you use taht word or if it is even the right one but I was going for endearments)
Ooh please update...
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I LOVE IT! i cant wait till you update

i just want to say that i love the new summary it always makes me smile when i read it and it opens up a few questions and it makes you want to read it to find out... what is go
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i really enjoyed it especally the part wheb they danced ooh and omg omg they are going to be a triad ( hey did you get that from the musical term) and i literaily cringed when vita killed his father... ooh the plot thickens...
pleaa update soon loving the rapid updates
sorry about the spelling writting this on my phone
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I havent read the chapter yet but I will in a minute but I would just like to let you know that I have asked my readers to check your story out and hopefully you will get some more readers :D :D :D :D
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Hey hey,
WOWOWOWOWWOW, I could feel her pain and his facade for a lack of emotion ;D
I love how everything is slowly falling into place and Aza unexpected emotions keep catching me by surprise and ooh I am soo excited for the ball chapter...
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OMG OMG OMG OMG, it was soooooooo intense when Vita told Aza to have sex with her, I thought that he wasn't going to go through with it but it was so shocking that he did but in a good way :D :D :D ooh and I really don't want Vita to win... Please update soon
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