Reviews for Addiction
Princess97 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Oh.. I almost thought you were actually talking about a drug, but then you said coffee and waist, and I was like, that's a new type of drug... the things people create these days... but then the end... smart. Good job!
MusiKina chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
It's nice, I like how you compared love to an addiction, because I know EXACTLY how it feels... LOL. It's sweet, but personally I think it's a bit too short, maybe it would be better if you compare the smell/taste/touch to other things or elaborate on how the "drug" makes you feel. Really good, though, keep writing!
somethingpequliar chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Super cute
Samsonet chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
This is a sweet little poem, very nice :) I did think you could elaborate a bit though (how does it taste? What does it smell like? And so